Shy to the bone

She headed for the corner.
Demure and graceful she sat ~ a wallflower.
Clueless of her feral charm.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 4:58 AM
This is a reality for so many shy girls. You describe it perfectly Line. Bravo! : )
Gauthier Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Connie.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 3:42 AM
I instantly see a beautiful girl who has been told she is less than beautiful, looking down, shy, not expecting to be asked.
Gauthier Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 8:43 AM
So rough growing up. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.
Wolf Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 11:56 PM
demure is so vastly underrated … I so like this one, Line. … I've pictured a librarian with glasses on and hair pulled back ... and knock-out figure underneath loose, ill-fitting, unstylish clothing :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon. Line xx
Roper Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Lovely Senryu <3
Gauthier Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Thank you, Eve. Most appreciated.
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