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Broken blades for tongues, a gaping slash where there’s a mouth. Spewing out whatever phrase, makes it to their lungs. Exhale, then inhale, Cycles of words that none can beat. Sputtering and gasping gasps, Let’s sew up that fault with a needle and pin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/4/2018 1:13:00 AM
Good poem. Wonderful and thoughtful lines. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2/24/2016 3:46:00 PM
Soomin Oh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:25:00 AM
There are a few mouths I have loved to sewed shut! Thanks for the write!
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