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Shush Did You Hear That

Shush, did you hear that? it is the wail of terminated babies the cries of soldiers who did not come home the tears running down mothers cheeks Shush, did you hear that? It is the crushing of a child's spirit the bruises of a beaten wife the sigh of falling in love Shush, did you hear that? it is the whimper of a hungry child at night, the giggle of a little girl at tea time an old man talking to his deceased wife Shush, did you hear that? it is the breaking of my heart when you said goodbye the howl of the old dog when they carried his master away the desperation of the multitudes clawing for existence Shush, did you hear that? it is a father's struggle to feed his family the slow beep of the ICU monitor Grandma humming while slowly rocking the baby Shush, did you hear that? it is the chilling wind sweeping across the fresh fallen snow the shooting star on a dark summer night the breaking of the dawn on a bright new day Shush, did you hear that? it is God's spirit telling me of his love the glorious choirs of angels and the bells of Heaven that wait for me Contest: Shush, Did you hear that? Sponsor: Anthony Slausen 9/12/18

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Date: 9/23/2018 11:10:00 PM
Back with most deserved congrats, Timothy. Superbly done.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/24/2018 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Miss Line
Date: 9/22/2018 10:44:00 AM
Excellent write Tim. Congrats on your well deserved win...Charlie
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/22/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thank you very much charles
Date: 9/22/2018 6:02:00 AM
Contemplative and meaningful from start to finish! This contest REALLY brought out some phenomenal poems! Congrats on your podium finish.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/22/2018 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for the kind and insightful words Jesse
Date: 9/21/2018 7:40:00 PM
I agree with the comment below. This is amazing and wonderful, well done !!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/21/2018 10:08:00 PM
Thank you Carrie
Date: 9/21/2018 6:44:00 PM
Tim, I am so glad I didn't have to judge this contest. Between you and Greg Barden, I would have had to call it a tie for first. But, as judging goes, I suppose there can only be one 1st place but I would violate that rule if I were the judge. Congrats on your excellent 2nd place win. A definite fave for me!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/21/2018 10:08:00 PM
Thank you Curtis for the kind words!
Date: 9/12/2018 8:51:00 AM
Wow! A FAVE for me.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/12/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thank you very much friend....:)
Date: 9/12/2018 8:01:00 AM
Well written Timothy, how sad that today many choose not to listen. Tom
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/12/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Tom thank you
Date: 9/12/2018 7:52:00 AM
Timothy, a fabulous write. I hope you’re a winner in the contest!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/14/2018 7:21:00 PM
Thank you friend!
Date: 9/12/2018 4:57:00 AM
You have not only risen to the occasion of this contest, you have surpassed what would have been anticipated or expected. BRAVO Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/13/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thank you much Caren!

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