Shrouds of Mist

Shrouds of mist did cloak the day.
Whispering winds with list did play.
Upon the graves of human minds
shrouds of mist were left behind.....

Well-wrought webs of darkness dim
vibrant thoughts held within.
The minds of humans do decay
as shrouds of mist on sorrow play.

Shrouds of mist did cloak the day
as waves of senses swept away
and all of those who dare rebel
were swiftly grasped and swirled to hell.

*Written at 16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/15/2012 8:01:00 AM
Ooo dark Ms Guzzi.. but very cool xxx Hugs
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Date: 3/14/2012 8:47:00 AM
Good morning ;-) so young and so good you were born with talent , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:07:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful.
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:05:00 PM
Wow, deep for sixteen...were you born with a pen and writing tablet? If not, you must have received them as a gift for your first birthday. I love the poem and the picture is a perfect visual. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:58:00 PM
Interesting work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 3/13/2012 4:21:00 PM
beautiful!!When did u start writing poem?A suopmail is flying there.
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:10:00 PM
A young poet, already gifted.....- oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/13/2012 11:10:00 AM
You had a super strong vocab at such a young age, Debbie. I love the maturity in your work and the darker side of your poetry...I feel as tho I am tippytoeing around a cemetery as I read thru this one. Amazing! Love, Gwendolen
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