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Shrouded In Grey

Shrouded in grey, summer storms seem mundane; till wet leaves turn shades of emerald green: ordinary's, redefined by the rain. The lion roars; clouds morph into its mane, and lightning flashes streak across the scene: shrouded in grey, summer storms seem mundane. Gusting winds spin a rusty weather vane, testing the sturdiness of Man's machine; ordinary's, redefined by the rain. The river rises as soggy slopes drain and electrified air smells ozone-clean: shrouded in grey, summer storms seem mundane. As the clouds disperse, a few drops remain, and the leaves on the trees retain their sheen; ordinary's, redefined by the rain. The monstrous storm, once depleted and slain, sullied skies shift back to aquamarine. Shrouded in grey, summer storms seem mundane; ordinary's, redefined by the rain.
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Allison Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 2:49 PM
such vivid imagery Emile i too chose this stanza, many congrats on your win:-) hug jan xx
Pinet Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Thanks Jan, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
May Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win..
Pinet Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Hello Emile, I love the way you describe the sky. The sound of thunder. A great poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Hello Emile, I am happy to hear this Emile. Enjoy yur evening my friend.
Pinet Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Thanks Darlene, you comments are always welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Emile, this is a beautifully-composed piece with vivid imagery. I loved "The lion roars; clouds morph into its mane." Very descriptive and perfect form. Good luck in the contest. I see you at the top! Ditto to Unseeking Seeker.
Pinet Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Thanks milt, you know how to bring a smile to my day, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 8:39 AM
What a delight to read!
Pinet Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Unseeking, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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