Notes About The Poem

Written on April 9, 2026
For SEVEN BY SEVEN Poetry Contest,
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 

Shroud of Dusk

Dusk fell velvety maroon when blue thrush whistled sharply, at cool death of afternoon, when teal stars glittered starkly. In silk moon rays, green grass stirred; and the red world turned darkly. Natural beauty observed.
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Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 3:42 AM
A lovely snapshot which you have given an apt description. I enjoyed both. Thank you for sharing them with us. Sara K
Buehler Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 5:23 PM
So glad you enjoyed them, Sara. Deepest thanks. Blessings
Miller Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 8:07 AM
A little jewel, congratulations
Buehler Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 9:45 AM
I appreciate your warm congratulations, Terry. :)
Daniels Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 2:37 AM
Beautiful, colourful, concise & powerful. Congrats on your placement, Evelyn. Thumbs up. Xx.
Buehler Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 9:36 PM
I extend my heartfelt thanks, Ghairo. Blessings and hugs. :)
Daniel Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 1:38 AM
A real gem, Evelyn, mine is much simpler on the same topic:)
Buehler Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your kind words, Joanna. I thought your poem was amazing! Congratulations on your win. :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 3:43 PM
A gem! So lovely
Buehler Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 8:16 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. :)
Rodgers Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 7:18 AM
Dear Evelyn, feels like dusk slipping on its jeweled shawl, maroon, teal, silk, all shifting as the day exhales. I love how you catch that exact moment when beauty darkens but doesn’t disappear, just changes temperature. Blessings, Daniel
Buehler Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 3:00 PM
Your expressions of appreciation are a delight, dear Daniel. Thank you so much for your kind words. Blessings. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 1:05 AM
A descriptive piece that captures the atmospheric transition from day to night. Interesting metaphors and imagery, with beautiful shades of nature.
Buehler Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 2:53 PM
Thank you for your kind insights, my friend. It was a pleasure to read them today. :)
Meadows Avatar
April 9, 2026 at 10:33 PM
A beautiful poem. Well written.
Buehler Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 2:44 PM
Deepest thanks, Daisy. :)
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