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Shrink Wrapped

can i get a back beat my doctor is a proctor not to be bothered about your father so go further blur blurring vision deciding decisions yo begin again begin again i've never sinned casting stones throw in the towel after a awhile fashion fashionably late for a date yo no make up making me make taking a take a second glance a second glance yo yo yo loca mujer hair dyed rojo afro fantastico don't know when even then then is now bow to you you're my Muse muse about get it all out no leather couch here where all are chairs take care take your meds bed is bedtime time i'm instead writing about her again about her again yo vinyl record scratching back records show you're good to go yo yo you're good to go te quiero te quiero

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Lady Labyrinth

Date: 6/23/2019 2:00:00 AM

cool

David Mchattie

Date: 4/12/2019 11:55:00 AM

Jeff. I find your poetry so interesting and different. If you have some time. Please go to my site, click on any poem and comment about the thought process that goes into your work. I would be very much interested, Have a great day.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/12/2019 1:55:00 PM

Twould be an honor David, but simply can explain that I'm manic depressive. Truly insane. Driven like a sports car by mi Musa. A real woman I admire from afar.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/12/2019 9:33:00 AM

The title played so well. I can feel it. Tight.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/12/2019 2:47:00 PM

Glad to read that you've read more of me then said. I was always wondering who all those, yet few, people to comment were. Actually Maureen, when I'm not putting down what I think us good; I'm just word playing. You should be my shrink jajaja.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/12/2019 2:05:00 PM

I received a comment from a poet here that I love to read. She dared delve deeper into my earlier poetry asylum long ago forgotten. She read "10 in 24" and said, "hard to hold the water in when the urge to purge happens". Unrelated but related replied, " I've a naturally large prostate." Truth IS better than fiction.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/12/2019 1:58:00 PM

I've always been told, "Never whistle while you pee." Never understood that but now starting to slightly understand. Thanks as always Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/12/2019 1:33:00 PM

Good art can do that. I read more of yours than I comment on, not disturbed, or at least not finding disturbing being a bad thing, the brain too intent on chewing to spit anything out.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/12/2019 10:55:00 AM

Next appointment the 25th. Thanks Maureen. I think some of my poems are disturbing people, but c'est la vie.