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cardinals sailing upon the swift wind singsong ebbing and flowing in duet of feathers 2/24/2019

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Date: 3/1/2019 1:08:00 PM

I like how you added a musical element to the poem through the line: "in duet of feathers". Nice work!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thank you, J.R.!

Date: 2/26/2019 11:31:00 AM

A beautiful and artistic write Kim, I painted the picture in my mind. Loved it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2019 5:38:00 PM

Thank you, Caryl!

Date: 2/25/2019 1:09:00 PM

Love your Kimo, Kim, especially the "duet of feathers." Excellent imagery. Best wishes, carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2019 8:11:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn! Hugs..Kim

Date: 2/25/2019 9:31:00 AM

Ooh, a new "Fav"; love this.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2019 8:11:00 PM

Thanks so much, M.L.! Hugs..Kim

Date: 2/24/2019 11:57:00 PM

Duet of feathers!! Enjoyed it :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2019 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Swetha!

Date: 2/24/2019 10:18:00 PM

Very pretty! Lovely imagery!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2019 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, Joe!

Date: 2/24/2019 4:34:00 PM

"duet of feathers" - wow. Love this.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2019 5:02:00 PM

Thanks so much! The challenge is to give an apt image of what was witnessed. Hugs xx