Showstopper

cardinals sailing upon the swift wind
singsong ebbing and flowing
in duet of feathers

2/24/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dawson Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 1:08 PM
I like how you added a musical element to the poem through the line: "in duet of feathers". Nice work!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Thank you, J.R.!
Muzzey Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 11:31 AM
A beautiful and artistic write Kim, I painted the picture in my mind. Loved it!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Caryl!
Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 1:09 PM
Love your Kimo, Kim, especially the "duet of feathers." Excellent imagery. Best wishes, carolyn
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, Carolyn! Hugs..Kim
Kiser Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Ooh, a new "Fav"; love this.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 8:11 PM
Thanks so much, M.L.! Hugs..Kim
Vangaveti Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 11:57 PM
Duet of feathers!! Enjoyed it :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Thank you, Swetha!
DiMino Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Very pretty! Lovely imagery!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 4:34 PM
"duet of feathers" - wow. Love this.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Thanks so much! The challenge is to give an apt image of what was witnessed. Hugs xx
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