Showing Off Her Diamonds

flakes begin with bits and glimpses
appearing from the middle of the gray winter sky
dusting brown dried grass, then covering
a frosty frosting that begins thickening

flakes become larger, more insistent.
magically transforming your yard to a wonderland
within an hour you have a glimpse of heaven
lovely silence amid the work of the snowflakes

a cardinal flies past, emphasizing snow’s whiteness
She gleams and twinkles, glistens
Showing off her diamonds, and her blue shadows
You gasp, for her magnificence startles you each time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rose  Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Bright beautiful and scintillating. Win it dear Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Thank you Mystic Rose Rose
Kauffman Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 10:38 AM
What a wonderful image - "showing off her diamonds!" So wonderfully creative Caren. A great image. All the best. Blessings!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Sam. I enjoyed it myself.
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 1:25 AM
- A beautiful poem, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I had fun trying to write imagery.
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 8:45 PM
Beautiful poem with stunning images. Nothing more beautiful than a cardinal against a blanket of snow. Thanks for writing this poem, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Thank you L Milton
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