Sara Kendrick Poet Choka

Showers From Above

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                                                    Purple Liatris
                                         Spikes underdeveloped now
                                          Rain scarce, high heat here
                                             All suffers_trees, plants
                                         Animals must sustain sweat
                                               Rain needed at once

Contest:"Any 2,4,6, or 8 Line Form"
Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Marvel Godwyn June 9, 2011 at 8:49 AM A wonderful one Sara, i enjoyed it. Marvel

James Foulk June 8, 2011 at 10:43 AM loved this beautiful piece of Choka, good luck in contest.

Jack Horne June 7, 2011 at 12:16 PM Beautiful imagery, Sara. A winner for sure!

Nette Onclaud June 7, 2011 at 3:13 AM you spoil me with resplendant imagery, sara... well, it's raining here, thank God!...winning wishes to you!:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2011 at 9:57 PM I sure know how much you want that rain and I pray it comes for you there, Sara. A chocka to let us know the plight of the land!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 6, 2011 at 8:30 PM a wonderful write for the contest Sara.. good luck with this hearty explanation of drought land heat as we expect 100 for the next four days here..no rain in sight.. good luck in the contest my friend..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 6:09 PM Wonderful entry to the contest with this nice write with visual images, Sara

Gwendolen Song June 6, 2011 at 5:18 PM I love the purple liatris--what a bumble bee magnet...(personal experience here....OUCH!) You are artistically painting the scene of a drought! Best to u in this contest of Brian. Gwendolen