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"showering You"

The faint view of us through the glass and rain... The water cascades down your shoulders.... As my hands meet the drops on your waist... The warmth of your skin absorbs the droplets... As our lips reach and touch so slightly... My fingers walk up your side and then down again... As your hands follow my neck and run through my hair... The shower door reflects steam and passion.... Only our hand prints remain as the water stops...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/31/2010 6:01:00 AM
Wow Michael, passionate write you got here.. Love the last line, luv Wilma
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:42:00 PM
Beautiful feeling poemed here ! You touched my poetic feel ! Great write ! james
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Date: 8/30/2010 3:44:00 PM
Uniquely romantic my White Knight and a true romantic piece... my fingers walk up your side and then down again.. wow..luv it... my wedding photos are now posted.. the site only allows 10 so Iour photographer chose the finest ones..luv.. enjoy
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Date: 8/30/2010 3:27:00 PM
Very passionate write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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