Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

Showdown

It's time for a showdown.
I saw him at the hoedown,
flirting with Missy Brown.
No wonder I have a frown. 
He behaves like such a clown
when he's out on the town.
I'll whack him on the crown.
That'll bring him back down
to Earth with a bang!

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Caren Krutsinger April 8, 2018 at 9:05 PM Jean, this rhyme makes me cheer, sing, whistle, hoot, and do the happy dance! Jean Murray April 9, 2018 at 2:59 AM Please let me join you Caren. I love dancing.

Kai Michael Neumann April 7, 2018 at 4:53 AM Good one. Kai Jean Murray April 7, 2018 at 7:52 AM Thank you Kai.

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2018 at 6:21 PM Ha! I see you had the same thought as I did going with the "own" rhyme!! The first thing that came to my mind was hoedown too!! Jean Murray April 6, 2018 at 6:57 PM I know. I thought it a coincidence as well. I had not read your poem and you had not read mine. I'd love to say great minds, but I have a long way to go to match yours Andrea.

Jan Allison April 6, 2018 at 9:59 AM what a fun monorhyme jean!:-) hugs jan xx Jean Murray April 6, 2018 at 10:10 AM Sometimes they just flow, don't they Jan?

Daniel Turner April 2, 2018 at 10:06 PM You once warned me about Irish girls, Jean. Now I see why. A very fun read:) Jean Murray April 3, 2018 at 1:15 AM Morning Daniel. We Irish are a different breed entirely.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 2, 2018 at 9:50 PM That was fun :) xomo!! Jean Murray April 3, 2018 at 1:13 AM I'm glad you took pleasure from it Maureen.

Vijay Pandit April 2, 2018 at 4:36 PM A fun read..enjoyed the weaving of words in rhymes..best for a win, Jean. Jean Murray April 2, 2018 at 4:39 PM Thank you as always Vijay. I appreciate your support.

Arturo Michael April 2, 2018 at 3:31 PM He's just having a little fun... don't whack him too hard...a little pinch on his cross buns might not be bad...All the best Jean Jean Murray April 2, 2018 at 4:22 PM A little pinch you say? OK, after I pull his ears I'll give it a go Arturo.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2018 at 2:45 PM - Funny, Jean ... take him by the ears :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jean Murray April 2, 2018 at 3:03 PM Good idea Sunshine. I'm at the end of my teather.