Showdown

It's time for a showdown. I saw him at the hoedown, flirting with Missy Brown. No wonder I have a frown. He behaves like such a clown when he's out on the town. I'll whack him on the crown. That'll bring him back down to Earth with a bang!

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2018 9:05:00 PM

Jean, this rhyme makes me cheer, sing, whistle, hoot, and do the happy dance!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 2:59:00 AM

Please let me join you Caren. I love dancing.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/7/2018 4:53:00 AM

Good one. Kai

Jean Murray
Date: 4/7/2018 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Kai.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2018 6:21:00 PM

Ha! I see you had the same thought as I did going with the "own" rhyme!! The first thing that came to my mind was hoedown too!!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2018 6:57:00 PM

I know. I thought it a coincidence as well. I had not read your poem and you had not read mine. I'd love to say great minds, but I have a long way to go to match yours Andrea.