NOTE:A tanka in English is essentially a 3 line hiku(SHOW)with a couplet amplification (TELL)
without- the waning sun warms my face shalom cloaks the wells within
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.