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Show Girls

There once were three girls from Athena Sweet Lena, Helena and Celestina Each to make a bit of dough All set to put on a show Gave fame’s wheel a spin in packed arena AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on April 26, 2018

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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/2/2018 2:28:00 AM
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I love, LOVE this poem!
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 4/29/2018 5:57:00 PM
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Your limerick reminds me a little of the saying, 'Be careful what you wish for...', Line. With humour written, days of yore, none better could be asked for. All the best and God bless. :) ~ Artsie
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:14:00 PM
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LOL thanks for your lovely and delightful visit, Artsieladie.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/27/2018 11:34:00 PM
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Did they do the can can ? Nice limerick
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2018 12:47:00 AM
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That's quite a visual, Pixie. Thanks.
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Harry Horsman
Date: 4/27/2018 4:08:00 PM
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Oh brilliant, What! to the lions?
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:45:00 PM
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Yikes - I'm afraid so.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/27/2018 12:01:00 PM
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Ooh, very clever humor in this limerick, Line. This is the most fun poetic form. Enjoyed reading!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:46:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Carolyn. I enjoy finding humour in all poetry forms.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/27/2018 10:15:00 AM
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AHA! The mistress of the last line surprise. I bow to you, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 8:46:00 PM
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LOL - Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Caren.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/27/2018 12:53:00 AM
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It sounds like fun to see three girls in an arena. Fun for guys!! I like the throwback to days of old!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2018 6:47:00 AM
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Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea. Much appreciated.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/26/2018 9:01:00 PM
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Clever! They'd no doubt pack the colosseum ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2018 10:11:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Maureen, for your lovely visit and comment.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/26/2018 3:25:00 PM
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line, so funny, reminds me of tv programs like ' master chef'... huggs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2018 3:51:00 PM
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Funny, nette. Thanks for your visit and comment.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 4/26/2018 1:35:00 PM
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LOL oh my. Gauthier, I love the names you gave the women.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2018 1:48:00 PM
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Thanks, Carlos, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

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