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An Old Shovel Contest   -   Sponsored by John Lawless

                          August 14, 2023 

Shoveling Dirt

I watched the farmer do daily chores, year after year.
On hot days, those of snow, each morning he was here
before lavender light of dawn, he checked on his crops
tended to all the animals and fed the pigs their slops

Farmer Ben didn't talk a lot about what needed repairs
I'm just an old shovel, but I heard his humble prayers
We're old friends, so I sensed his worry and frustration
each time he clutched my handle, I felt Ben's desperation

There were times when only digging relieved his stress
and I helped him work off the concern he couldn't repress
We shoveled snow and broke up clods of the Earth's crust
Always taking care to clean me so I wouldn't start to rust

I'm gettin' kinda old. Been here thirty years, maybe more
Since Ben bought the farm, and me at the hardware store
I feel honored to hang on the highest hook on the wall
but didn't ever mind he used me to clean dung from a stall

Sometimes a gentle hand holds me in a garden of flowers
His missus keeps me busy in Spring, planting for hours
If a rock bed I hit while she went about with our spading,
she'd clear them with her hands, and the roots pervading

Don't know how much longer I'll be in working condition
but I'm not ready to be retired or put out of commission
When Ben needs me, from the wall he'll take me down
I'll always be ready and willing to help him break ground
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M  Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Oh l just love this Lin….very beautiful and somewhat sad…..can't believe you had me feeling sad for an old shovel haha!! Debx
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:11 AM
Deb, you have such a tender heart, so I CAN believe you were sad over the shovel. lol Seriously, thank you for finding my poem so believable. hugs
Downing  Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 8:51 PM
Lin, this was such an enjoyable read. A worthy shovel to have for sure. Excellent write, and a great contender in the contest. All the best dear. :)
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:09 AM
Hi Akkina and thanks for enjoying these lines. I appreciate your rallying comments. ;-)
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:42 AM
You've brought the humble shovel to life in this well composed personification. Best of luck in the contest Lin. Tom
Lane Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Hi Tom. Thanks for the comments on this one. I've been thinking about you.
Narain Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Nice personification about a shovel. It does not retire.
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 11:05 AM
We take lots of our tools for granted. Thanks for your comments, Jay.
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 10:44 AM
what wonderful personification Lin, not sure what John will think of my effort, its pretty crap compared to this lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 11:05 AM
oh but Jan... to say one of your poems is 'crap' is a compliment. I read your personification and it made me lol, literally. That's worth more than a poem about digging a ditch!
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Excellent Personification Lin, you put some backbreaking work into this one, and it paid off in spades, I couldn’t resist the puns, I reckon you’ll still be going strong when Ben finally retires, you nailed that ending good too, big contender for contest, I enjoyed! especially the dirty work, cheers David
Lane Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:56 AM
I like the way you think. ;-)
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 12:26 PM
More than worthy of entering a contest, I was more thinking of it winning!
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 10:02 AM
David, I’d mind if you didn’t take the opportunity to use puns. Thanks a heap for thinking it’s worthy of being entered in a contest.
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