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Shoulda Woulda Coulda

I didn't talk to beauty, I shoulda If I hadn't froze up, I woulda I had the chance, I coulda If I wasn't such a wuss, I shoulda Just say hi, I woulda And start a conversation, I coulda She walked right by, as she shoulda Didn't notice me, but woulda If I just said hi, I coulda

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2019 7:06:00 PM

Hello Timothy McGuire, yes you shoulda. have a nice evening my friend.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/5/2019 12:19:00 AM

Thank you Darlene

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/10/2019 9:38:00 AM

Missed chances, hey?

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/10/2019 7:52:00 PM

Hind sight is 20/20! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/6/2019 7:28:00 AM

Lovely, Timothy. Most endearing.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/12/2019 11:28:00 PM

I usually regret throwing away poems... I prefer to throw them in the Drafts pile.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/6/2019 11:58:00 AM

At first I didn't really like this one. I almost deleted it but it grew on me. I'm glad I didn't. It was hard to write so I didn't want to throw it away.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/6/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thank you

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/6/2019 7:07:00 AM

Why didn't ya Timothy--I couldn't ya pass it up, Aloha William

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/6/2019 11:54:00 AM

Nerves got the best of him. Big chicken! :)