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should I wake.... one morn' to find you gone without so much as a sad goodbye, do not take our moon... away, too. leave me a day full of sunshine and your silhouette dancing in my daydreams give... me something to hold! (yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly. Line 1-15: 3,4,4,2,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 09/15/2021

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Date: 1/9/2023 7:09:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/10/2023 2:37:00 AM
Thank you very much, JCB:-)
Date: 9/15/2021 2:01:00 PM
Awesome! Perfect fit for your form. Into my FAVES.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/15/2021 3:19:00 PM
Thanks for the wonderful feedback and FAV, Vijay:-)
Date: 9/15/2021 11:52:00 AM
Hello Edward, should you wake and find her gone.. you would be upset. This is a new form you invented. oh- nicely done bblessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/17/2021 11:34:00 AM
Edward, can this be done on any subject? Or does it have to be on a certain type of subject? I am just wondering. blessing my frined.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/15/2021 12:51:00 PM
As always, thank you so much for the delightful visit, Darlene:-)
Date: 9/15/2021 11:02:00 AM
This is a marvelous Yalto, Edward. Well thought-out, and perfect for this format.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/15/2021 11:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, Milt:-)

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