Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Should You Leave

should I wake....

one morn' to find 
    you gone 
       without so much
          as a sad goodbye,
             do not take 
                our moon...
                    away, too.

leave me 
   a day full 
      of sunshine 
         and your silhouette 
            dancing in my daydreams 
                give... 
                    me something to hold!

                           (yalto)



"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly.
Line 1-15: 3,4,4,2,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 09/15/2021

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JC Brul January 9, 2023 at 7:09 AM Beautiful! Congratulations! Edward Ibeh January 10, 2023 at 2:37 AM Thank you very much, JCB:-)

Vijay Pandit September 15, 2021 at 2:01 PM Awesome! Perfect fit for your form. Into my FAVES. Edward Ibeh September 15, 2021 at 3:19 PM Thanks for the wonderful feedback and FAV, Vijay:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu September 15, 2021 at 11:52 AM Hello Edward, should you wake and find her gone.. you would be upset. This is a new form you invented. oh- nicely done bblessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu September 17, 2021 at 11:34 AM Edward, can this be done on any subject? Or does it have to be on a certain type of subject? I am just wondering. blessing my frined. Edward Ibeh September 15, 2021 at 12:51 PM As always, thank you so much for the delightful visit, Darlene:-)

L Milton Hankins September 15, 2021 at 11:02 AM This is a marvelous Yalto, Edward. Well thought-out, and perfect for this format. Edward Ibeh September 15, 2021 at 11:25 AM Thank you very much, Milt:-)