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Should Tomorrow Fade Into Oblivion

If today were in fact the end of days
We'd face it with no scintilla of anxiety or sadness 
because our fate is in God's hands
I'd leave absolutely nothing unsaid 
between us; no time would be wasted...

morosely waiting until the day fades 
into nothingness at the stroke of midnight
I'd kiss you a thousand times, if not more
and I'll never leave your sight 
until the very end, my sweet.

We'd seize the day; fireflies in the night sky
We'd take plenary advantage
of the spectacular here and now
and make each moment glitter like gold.
Oh, what fun we'll have, while it lasts

We'd throw a mammoth going-out party
With our near and dear ones; a party to end 
all parties. I'd take solace in the thought that
we'd be together when the day 
quietly fizzles out like a whisper in the wind

The love I have for you would grow
exponentially, and explode
like a stick of dynamite, better yet, a bomb
We'd lie on the bed of roses I made just for you
and gaze upon the countless stars in the sky...

for the very last time! We'd sing 
and dance under the harvest moon. If separated
by an ocean, i'd somehow magically make it
back to you, in the nick of time
so help me God


Submitted for...
STRAND SELECT 10,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest(Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date: 01/12/2020

"What If There Was No Tomorrow" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One  (Winner: 2nd Place)
Date written and submitted: 08/21/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 6:30 AM
Thank you very much, Eve:-)
Adams Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:24 PM
wow...such a romantically beautiful write... so many things to do with the ones your love on the last day...congrats on your nice win with this beauty :) hugs
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Sandra:-) I'm so glad you loved my poem! God bless...
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 1:04 PM
- Beautiful and romantic last day on our earth, Edward - Love the bed of roses :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) Glad you loved it!
Scars Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 11:35 AM
you are so right, it is in God's hands, I truly believe that too. What a day to have knowing it was your last, huh? Anyways, congrats dear Ed, you never cease to amaze me with your pen :)-luloo ps...check email
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Lu:-)
Devonshire Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 10:23 AM
Expressing love is surely a good way to spend that last day. You have a romantic soul, Edward. What woman wouldn't want to lie on a bed of roses looking up at the stars with their true love? A wonderfully passionate poem. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 11:13 AM
Aww, thank you so much, Carolyn!:-) I appreciate the wonderful comments and visit!
Smith Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:50 AM
An excellent write Edward, congrats. :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, Gary:-)
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:23 AM
This is excellent Edward ! Very special. Congratulations for your win :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi:-)
One Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 4:19 AM
Our last days should be spent with those we love doing things we enjoy... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:01 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, Silent One!:-) Most obliged.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 8:46 AM
This makes me imagine how those living through the Second World War would have been truly alive during their moments of reprieve. I Think in stolen moments they were alive in a way that you have imagined in this poem.
Ibeh Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 11:45 AM
I can't possibly imagine such moments! Thanks for the interesting comments and visit, Richard:-)
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Better to spend the day with the dearest if there's no tomorrow..I enjoyed the read, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 11:47 AM
True indeed! Thank you, Vijay:-) Glad you enjoyed the poem...
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