Randall Yeaney Poet Blank verse

Should I Continue This Struggle

In the morning and night, I have never been at peace.
Lost and focused in my thoughts without ease.
I am clouded with worries and cries every minute I see.
Struggling and trying to succeed is my mission to achieve.
With sleepless night and many sacrifices, I have to proceed 
Should I continue these struggles or better hold my peace?

Being successful has always been my thoughts 
In luxurious I have fantasy enough 
Dream, dreams, I have had enough.
But when will the break of success be brought
Should I continue these struggles or better hold my peace?

My mind sees beyond what I hope to achieve 
Yet the daily pain causes me more grief.
Is it the best time or the worst time?
I am lost but want to succeed, but I can no longer bear the pain 
Should I continue these struggles or hold my peace?

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Beata Agustin November 1, 2024 at 7:39 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.