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Shot Through the Heart

A smoking gun reveals inside clouds of truth
behind one mask lies a flaming bullet in the end

These eyes burning trails down the cheeks 
salted water from the deepest ocean wounds

Holding grace an undying angel of beauty softy sings
forever and always Heaven dances on wings of love

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Arthur Vaso

April 6, 2015 at 11:11 PM

In a few short lines you have taken us on on a journey of pain and love, this is simply a tremendous poem, when one can say so much like this, well for me amazing A7

Liam Mcdaid

April 26, 2015 at 4:50 PM

ah thank you arthur dear pal heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciated wishing you a blessed day sorry i am late replying

Maurice Yvonne

April 4, 2015 at 8:42 AM

Sad but a beautiful poem all the same.

Liam Mcdaid

April 26, 2015 at 4:24 PM

thank you maurice for the beautiful comment sorry i am late deeply appreciated pal wishing you a blessed day

Liam Mcdaid

April 26, 2015 at 4:20 PM

thank you maurice for the beautiful comment sorry i am late deeply appreciated pal wishing you a blessed day

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 3, 2015 at 6:13 AM

- No HUGE speech from me ..... just: hugs X 99 and Love :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

April 3, 2015 at 6:24 AM

ah so sweet of you anne lise wonderful comment dear pal smiling your avatar just laid the golden egg in my heart lol happy easter to you and your family ha ha got me smiling like mad

Eileen Manassian

April 2, 2015 at 11:32 PM

Oh Liam...I feel the pain. :( You have a beautiful heart...an honest and caring heart...a loyal heart. I hope it heals and loves again. Lovely write, my dear. Have a wonderful Easter....Hugs

Liam Mcdaid

April 3, 2015 at 5:35 AM

the truth eileen the pain was worth it in the end as love will always remain in the heart and grow with undying beauty justice walks humbly hand in hand with god smiling in his faith in the end wishing you and your family a very happy easter passing you a smile

Dorian Petersen Potter

April 2, 2015 at 8:49 PM

Hi Liam!A very beautiful pen but mostly sad but for the last couplet.It breaks my heart to imagine anyone hurting you in any way again.Tears came out reading this 'cause I can feel your pain and you don't need or deserve anymore hurting in your life not now and not ever.You deserve all the happiness in the world.A 7+++!Truly a mighty golden pen!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.Always praying for your healing.Keep the faith,just cling to him and you'll be fine.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Liam Mcdaid

April 3, 2015 at 5:25 AM

wonderful comment dorian thank you kindly dear friend wishing you and your familiy a beautiful easter in his light blessed

Charmaine Chircop

April 2, 2015 at 6:44 PM

I hope that guardian angel helps heal all the wounds .I do believe in angels,many of which come without wings,Such a beautiful post Liam.Happy Easter dear friend.

Liam Mcdaid

April 3, 2015 at 5:21 AM

so very true charmaine angels always touch with caring words in loves beauty wonderful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed day and you and your family a very happy easter

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