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blazing overkill attacking inner depths savagely i ride weathering the storm galloping on the crest of waves unfurling high winds battered and torn russian roulette revolving rolling in the chambers lead heavy spinning circles upside down pulling on feelings emotions explode burning fire in depths shot through the heart death to a lovers emotion love lives in you died

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Date: 9/15/2013 9:28:00 AM
Well ..I went to the 1st that drew me in , after not reading for a while ..and so not Disappointed, now I understand why My Grandfather Murray tantalized my Grandmother Dempsey , so on .. many Irish names in out line ..Love Your writing !
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/15/2013 10:17:00 AM
YVETTE THAT IS A SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT DEEPLY APPRECIATED THANK YOU DEARLY OH YOU ARE A COLEEN DEAS
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Date: 9/15/2013 9:28:00 AM
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:47:00 AM
Dynamic!!!!Totally awesome imagery!!!!! ^_^ Y.LN
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/15/2013 6:54:00 AM
thank you for the amazing comment deeply appreciated yvette
Date: 9/14/2013 2:34:00 PM
wow, this is very beautiful and sad at the same time. I love the way that you have written this :) wonderful work here, liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/15/2013 6:52:00 AM
destiny thank you for the sweet and very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/14/2013 1:25:00 PM
an explosive, powerful scene bringing me real close to your own visuals, liam... great stuff!..:) huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/14/2013 2:00:00 PM
THANK YOU DEEPLY WONDERFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED

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