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Short Poems About Life Slug – Free Verse Poem That slippery slime, That crawls out of damp places, In the sorrowful night, It wishes to find a home, A home of vegetables is like a dream, If it was a dream like no wonder any slug likes one, When they crawl out in the day light, In the garden full of vegetables, Their dream becomes one. source: https://poemtheart.com (Sarah Shahzad, November 2019)

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Date: 1/24/2020 9:52:00 PM
DAMN ITS GOOD, WELL WRITTEN BROTHER!
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Muddasar javad
Date: 1/27/2020 12:21:00 AM
thank you so much..
Date: 1/10/2020 11:25:00 AM
Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.
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Muddasar javad
Date: 1/13/2020 12:21:00 AM
thank you so much :)
Date: 12/27/2019 2:52:00 PM
I will never think of slugs in the same way again; you have given them a whole new charisma. Enjoyed.
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Date: 1/3/2020 1:11:00 AM
Thanks for the kind visit.. :)
Date: 12/25/2019 7:58:00 AM
Like the power of your observation--well done!
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Muddasar javad
Date: 1/3/2020 1:11:00 AM
I'm happy that you liked it! :)
Date: 12/16/2019 5:14:00 PM
I enjoyed this one and how you chose a most unique animal!! (or is it insect??) Hmmmmm whatever the snail family might be!
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Date: 12/17/2019 5:49:00 AM
& also please check my site poemtheart com thank you :) bless & love..
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Muddasar javad
Date: 12/17/2019 5:47:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words & I am glad you enjoyed it
Date: 12/16/2019 7:49:00 AM
Enjoyed your slug verse but we try and keep them away from the vegetable patch lol. Tom
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Muddasar javad
Date: 12/17/2019 5:53:00 AM
hahaha yes sure.. & I'm happy that you liked it! hmmm please also check my site poemtheart com thank you.. :)
Date: 12/4/2019 7:57:00 AM
For some a small dream is a big dream. I like this perspective. If I eat my vegetables I might be denying a Slug it’s dream home. ;0)
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Muddasar javad
Date: 12/6/2019 1:50:00 AM
Thanks so much for your thoughts on this.
Date: 12/4/2019 12:37:00 AM
I like the twisty way this poem makes its way thorough vegetables like a slug!
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Date: 12/6/2019 1:51:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it