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Short Love Poem

i love you that is my burning flame of love i set fourth the day i kissed your sweet lips memorys of us will always be my best friend in my precious sweet heart .

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/21/2017 10:39:00 PM

very passionate; nicely done -JT

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/27/2017 2:40:00 AM

Yeah short one but again poem is all about feelings, the length doesn t matter, only the feelings and how you explain them matters, and you ve explained all of it beautifully in just 6 lines, and these are enough, you are definately a gpod poet,

Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 4/1/2017 9:05:00 AM

Short and sweet. Poetry speaks most to me when little words are use to express large things.... condensed and pure. Well wrote, Ashley!

Phil Capitano

Date: 11/21/2016 8:00:00 AM

Sweet. :)

White Wolf

Date: 11/4/2016 5:50:00 AM

Very romantic Ashley