Short Love Poem

i love you 
that is my burning 
flame of love 
i set fourth the day i kissed your sweet lips 
memorys of us will always be 
my best friend in my precious sweet heart .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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J.T. Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 10:39 PM
very passionate; nicely done -JT
Ajmal Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 2:40 AM
Yeah short one but again poem is all about feelings, the length doesn t matter, only the feelings and how you explain them matters, and you ve explained all of it beautifully in just 6 lines, and these are enough, you are definately a gpod poet,
Zerlaut Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Short and sweet. Poetry speaks most to me when little words are use to express large things.... condensed and pure. Well wrote, Ashley!
Capitano Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Sweet. :)
Wolf Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 5:50 AM
Very romantic Ashley
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