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27.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Short Fuse -

                                  Consider a smarter analysis
                            - loveliness immortal with a squeeze

                                     If you have a short fuse
                                            - learn to lose
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Debole Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Hi, Agree! People need to be gracious when losing. Not everyone can win all of the time. Being able to lose with dignity shows character. Love your message! - Gail
Mcdaid Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Smiling the fuse needs a match to light striking but true you paint the fuse smiling
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Excellent advice!
Proxenos Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Goodness me what an enthralling read Anne-Lise, and clever. I see no contest, a shame this would have been a certain win. I see you have taken Sunshine Smile out, but you are our Sunshine on Soup. Loved Sunshine Smile but love Anne-Lise as much. HUGS AND AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
Poet Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 7:12 AM
An absolutely captivating piece of writing! Wishing you the utmost success in the contest, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 7:16 AM
- No contest, Las - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
One Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Wise words my friend.. I am a very calm person.. very little annoys me or make me angry... sometimes bad drivers annoy me though lol..
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 1:07 PM
- Untruths really annoy me, S.O. - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Nice Epigram. Like the lines, "If you have a short fuse, learn to lose"
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 1:04 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jay :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 9:05 AM
Yes, Anne-Lise, a quick temper can be disastrous. Cute pig. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:52 AM
- Thank you for reading my poem, Sara - Always a pleasure :) - hugs
Brotherton Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 8:41 AM
A fantastic write. The best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Have a glorious day.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:50 AM
- Jerry, greatly appreciate your comment ... thank you :) - hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Wonderful. God bless you, love the pic. Much love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:49 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Gina :) - hugs
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