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Short Circuit Thoughts

I'm sitting here with short circuit thoughts. In a lousy dilemma, I don't know what to do. I had a thousand watts dreams for this love affair. But it all came crashing down due to the fact that it was a microwave type of love. We didn't let it take time to bake or simmer in a crockpot. Now it's over, faster than it began. Alexis Y. 08/9/2021

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/14/2021 1:36:00 PM

Fine write Alexis, cleverly done with nice imagery and expression. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/13/2021 12:26:00 PM

This is a poetic gem, so clever Alexis dear friend to use the terminology you did to describe, a half baked love affair! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/13/2021 1:15:00 AM

This is what poetry is all about, Alexis, so many thoughts going down different roads, to bring pleasure in so many different ways. Love this gem.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/10/2021 2:36:00 PM

Microwave love doesn’t last, it heats up quick and cools down fast. Slow is the way to go when falling in love with a new beau. A good write Alexis… Belle

Marilene Evans

Date: 8/10/2021 1:01:00 PM

Oh, No!!! That's why I don't want to use microwave, even in hitting up left overs. I rather use the stove, slow; but better. Something better is coming.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/10/2021 11:28:00 AM

Hello Alexis Y,. yep it happened too fast. Hugs Darlene

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/10/2021 10:20:00 AM

Wow, Alexis, You wrote brilliant prose; I'm sorry it didn't turn out as planned; it's not worth your sorrow, Alexis, because I'm confident you'll start it properly the next time.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/10/2021 8:31:00 AM

Wow, Alexis. Your electric input is high and might explode. Calm down. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/10/2021 7:56:00 AM

Sounds like you blew a fuse Alexis, but it can be fixed. Hope your week is going well Tom