Short and Swift

Summer late arrival cooler than usual sun timidly peeking through clouds soon gone

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John Loving Iii

Date: 7/8/2011 1:56:00 PM

dont chase it away.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/7/2011 12:37:00 PM

Dear, if you come to visit me, you will have about 9 months of summer. It gets old fast, but I can appreciate the angst in this delightful cinquain. Excellent work, Joyce. Love, Carolyn

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/7/2011 7:54:00 AM

I love summer. I don't want it to go. Your poem is very motivating. I feel like I must get out and do more before it's gone! Nicely done!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2011 4:51:00 AM

What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your poetry in which you share a little of yourself maybe without even realizing it. You have written from your soul oh yes you have. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Joyce. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/6/2011 2:34:00 PM

Beautiful expressions on the late arrival of summer

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/6/2011 1:47:00 PM

enjoyed reading your work today!! Have a relaxingevening today!

James Peranteau

Date: 7/6/2011 12:27:00 PM

Well hello dear poet ! How are you? A wonderful write Joyce ! And where is this cool summer? Here it has been the hottest my friend *smiles* Can't seem to escape it ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james