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Shores Afar

Far away on the shores afar So shines my brimming star Covering light on sand and sea Seashell and seamen there be Mesmerizing all creations at sea Every day it tells a newer story! Far away on the shores afar So anchors my ship of hope Carrying cargo and men if so With the burning torch of hope It sails through stormy weather To make my lone shore happier! Far away on the shores afar So speeds my only racing car Driven by happiness and love Powered by the pull of my love It drives on like a elegant dove On the sands of the barren cove! Far away on the shores afar.......!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/12/2009 4:41:00 AM
very good idea..perhaps a bit too much repetition of words? Light & Love
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Date: 10/10/2009 5:15:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Seema. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2009 7:56:00 PM
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it tonight...Marty
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