Shores Afar

Far away on the shores afar
So shines my brimming star
Covering light on sand and sea
Seashell and seamen there be
Mesmerizing all creations at sea
Every day it tells a newer story!

Far away on the shores afar
So anchors my ship of hope
Carrying cargo and men if so
With the burning torch of hope
It sails through stormy weather
To make my lone shore happier!

Far away on the shores afar
So speeds my only racing car
Driven by happiness and love
Powered by the pull of my love
It drives on like a elegant dove
On the sands of the barren cove!

Far away on the shores afar.......!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 4:41 AM
very good idea..perhaps a bit too much repetition of words? Light & Love
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October 10, 2009 at 5:15 PM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Seema. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend. Love, Carol
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October 9, 2009 at 7:56 PM
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it tonight...Marty
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