Shoreline Beauty

morning butterflies

                                   flutter through sunlit sea caves

                                           tide waters rush in





Written on 6/30/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 6:55 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
Leiser Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, Funom, for stopping by and reading my poem! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Mutindi Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 4:30 AM
Congratulations Laura!
Leiser Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:59 AM
Thank you, Grace, for your kind words. I appreciate them :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your win Laura. I thought yours was exceptional!
Leiser Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Thank you so much, Connie!! You are too kind, and I appreciate your care and interest, too :)
Wigley Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:34 PM
Wow, Laura, you've got one hell of a back garden at your place. Lovely Haiku. Well done. Viv x
Leiser Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Thanks, Viv! In fact, I get to see it from our older sailboat that we have when we go out on the ocean :)
Anish Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:26 PM
Nice, well thought out haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Leiser Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Thank you very much, Matthew, for your kind words!
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:37 PM
wow, I love this one! Congrats on a well deserved win.
Leiser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Your kind congrats mean so much to me :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Congrats on ur winning awesome haiku Laura!
Leiser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma! I really appreciate your kind words :)
Carter Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Very nice congrats!
Leiser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Thank you very much, Lee! I appreciate your kind words :)
Roper Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 6:19 PM
Nice write, Laura , congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 9:18 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. I appreciate your kind words :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 6:13 PM
very nice Laura congrats on placing hugs
Leiser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 9:22 PM
Thank you very much for placing me, Shadow! I'm glad you liked my haiku :)
A  Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 5:58 PM
Laura, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Leiser Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 9:17 PM
Thank you, Skat! You are so kind to stop by with kindness :)
Gifford Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Oh, Laura, what a beautiful image you have written. Good luck in the contest. ~~~Darlene
Leiser Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Thank you, Darlene! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Soup mail
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June 30, 2015 at 11:54 PM
Thank you, Connie!!
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