Shoreline

Watching sunrise, shoreline's ablaze Love letter sent from Thee I sing a psalm, an Easter palm And start my day with glee. Watching sunset, shoreline's agleam A note Thou sent with smile I heave a sigh, a love's reply And thank God for this isle. No. 2 Shoreline Let Me Feel Your Lines - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 31 March 2015

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/3/2015 11:19:00 PM

GREAT POEM MY FRIEND. JUST FOUND IT AND A PLEASURE TO READ. That isle was Cebu for me, where my beautiful sweety lived before we got married. And our time(one week) at the famous Boracay Resort, gave us a very special shoreline to remember forever that blessed night. A7 on your fine poem..

Noel Villarosa

Date: 5/17/2015 1:04:00 AM

Congratulations, Kim and well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2015 12:10:00 AM

congrats on your poem, sweetie. Sure do love seeing the winners of this contest!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2015 1:15:00 PM

Back with congratulations on a deserved win, Kim. hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2015 12:48:00 PM

Ahh!! With great feeling this winner was penned!!Congrats!!Sara

Julia Ward

Date: 5/15/2015 6:30:00 AM

A neat poem saying a lot. // 7 // Julia, with congratulations on your win.

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 5/15/2015 2:00:00 AM

All you have is there, Congs Kim on winning My Fav Lines, I sing a psalm, an Easter palm And start my day with glee. Hugs Dear one #8ryan

Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 5/18/2015 5:09:00 AM

Kim you're so welcome

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2015 7:41:00 PM

Kim :-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2015 5:21:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Paul Schneiter

Date: 5/7/2015 9:15:00 PM

Kim, I love this; it "sings" gratitude to our Maker. And the imagery—wonderful!

Noel Villarosa

Date: 4/19/2015 3:53:00 AM

I love watching a sunrise, as it slowly surveys the vastness of the shoreline. Even sunset has its role to put a smile in every leave-taking moments. Good luck to you on this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Estela Canama

Date: 4/16/2015 4:36:00 AM

This is a refreshing piece, Kim. It is good to cherish the nature's gift.

David Meade

Date: 4/6/2015 11:33:00 AM

Love letters that fill our hearts with a deep love and joy -- a peace that passes all understanding! The sun and waves dancing to the wind -- hear their praise! Nicely done Kim, your words this morning were a welcome greeting from the dark night! 7 fav

John Williams

Date: 4/5/2015 2:57:00 PM

So nice Kim---i was there. Kind regards----John

Abdul Malik

Date: 4/5/2015 12:34:00 PM

Ha, to see the shoreline ablazed and agleamed is a simple bliss!! Good luck.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/4/2015 9:48:00 AM

They say write what you know. Now I understand why! Excellent.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2015 1:56:00 PM

Hi Kim! I like how you mingled your sunrise and sunset with His gifts. Your shoreline attracts and captivates. gl in the contest. Have a Blessed & Happy Easter! :) // paul

Kim Shaw

Date: 4/2/2015 4:49:00 PM

Hi Kim! This makes my mouth water to visit a tropical clime. The sunrises and sunsets are always my favorite times of the day! Lovely poem dear friend. Hugs, Kimberly

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/2/2015 9:38:00 AM

beautiful lines.. I can feel it Kim.. :) wow.. ! hugs //olive eloisa

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 4/1/2015 3:04:00 PM

SHORELINE - I love ! Watching sunrise - Much to early for me ! How nice - Love letter sent from Thee ? B. J. A" 2

James Peranteau

Date: 4/1/2015 9:06:00 AM

On my computer's Destop Background, I have this picturesque shoreline ! Wonderful to see words such as yours here dear poet, it will forge its stay, as I from time to time change it...yet this one mezzzzzzzzzmerises this soul ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week Kim<~~ got that right(write) ;)..much love, james

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2015 3:54:00 AM

oh so beautifully penned Kim - I do love your spiritual take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/1/2015 12:12:00 AM

This is beautiful, Kim...check your syllable count in the second line. I'm counting seven instead of six. I hope you don't mind me pointing it out, I'd hate to see you not place because of one syllable! Hugs, Rhonda

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 3/31/2015 11:32:00 PM

I loved this Lines "Watching sunset, shoreline's agleam A note from Thou with smile I heave a sigh, a summer high And thank God for this isle" Morning, i love the pictures you put in this poem

Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 4/7/2015 11:33:00 PM

Hey i did paint the entire picture of your country Kim, i hope you had a great Easter Bryan Loves and hugs too my dear

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/31/2015 10:14:00 PM

Beautiful write!