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Shore Thing

I can hear them swirling Mixing into the ocean My thoughts at sea Too hard to find again Once they’ve been released But now, a part of something more Something that makes up Most of this world Lost in an underwater abyss They’ve been set free Out of reach But there forever now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/2/2020 11:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 4th place in the contest, Sadie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:14:00 AM
Interesting poem, Sadie. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 10/1/2020 8:53:00 PM
Very intriguing idea in your poem, Sadie! I enjoyed it! :)
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