Shore Thing

I can hear them swirling
Mixing into the ocean 
My thoughts at sea 
Too hard to find again
Once they’ve been released 
But now, a part of something more
Something that makes up 
Most of this world 
Lost in an underwater abyss 
They’ve been set free 
Out of reach 
But there forever now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:19 AM
- Congratulations on your 4th place in the contest, Sadie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 2, 2020 at 11:14 AM
Interesting poem, Sadie. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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October 1, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Very intriguing idea in your poem, Sadie! I enjoyed it! :)
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