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Shore of Destiny

blue-green reflections
in the place where pearl waves foam
rushing faltering

land mesmerizes
snowy billows walk the miles
then swoon in gold sun

mauve future's calling
all the sunlit pleasant hours
in rooms none yet know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:34 PM
- A dazzlingly beautiful haiku, Evelyn :) - We had very thick fog today ...I heard the waves but didn't see them...I smelled the sea but didn't see it :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 2:15 PM
Anne-Lise, it's so nice to find that this poem conveyed pleasant sensations for you. Thank you for letting me know. All my best. Hugs :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 1:04 AM
How beautiful are your haikus. Imagery galore.
Buehler Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Thank you so much for the peasant thoughts. :)
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 6:36 PM
'in rooms none yet know' --- Wow! That's pure poetry, Evelyn. Remarkable line! Kudos, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Thank you for the inspiration and pleasure of your comment, Gershon. Blessings.
Hind Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Beautiful work! Your images were so like an ocean. Pearl waves, rooms none yet know..lovely.
Buehler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 4:38 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your remarks, Paige. :)
Pandit Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 5:17 AM
Superbly done, Evelyn: blue-green reflections in the place where pearl waves foam rushing faltering...
Buehler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 4:37 PM
I'm so delighted. Thank you, Vijay. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 11:04 PM
I always admire how you use your colors.
Buehler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 4:33 PM
Thank you, my friend. Have a nice evening. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 8:33 PM
Colors foam up in your sea in sunlit pleasant hours! Hugs, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Your remarks are very nice to hear, Kim. Thank you. Blessings and hugs.
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