Shopping Spree

Shopping Spree

Picking
Paying
Stopping  
Looking
Spending way too much, picking, paying.  
Buyer of things, lots!  Stopping. Looking.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
March 17, 2010
Poetic form: Tyburn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 7:08 AM
I really like this one, Dane ann. This is my favorite one of the day! Just saw your beautiful artwork of the woodland scene. How talented you are. LUv,Andrea
Strand Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 12:51 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Dane.Rgds Brian & congrats on your recen contest success
A  Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 11:20 PM
HA... GOOD WRITE... REMINDS ME OF MY TEENAGE DAUGHTER
Kendrick Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Hadn't seen this one before..Will have to try to write one..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 5:31 PM
When my wife goes "window" shopping, she comes home with windows. I panic near malls. Vince
Devonshire Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 4:30 PM
Another new verse form! I like this one very much, Dane Ann. I used to be a "buyer of things, lots" until I decided to cease "stopping, looking." Nice form! Love, Carolyn
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