Shopping Malls

Shopping malls, where
people gather,
shop, then go
    crazy.

wrote 9-9-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Williams Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 8:27 PM
oh yes I hate shopping malls, a very good poem.
Winter Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 4:40 PM
I must say I have gotten over shopping malls. Not shopping, just the big malls where it is easy to go crazy! Love, Shar
White Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 4:25 PM
never a truer statement, this write made me smile, James read my write entitled the men of poetry soup, take care D-ncye
Richards Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 4:01 PM
Malls....an American institution!! :)....Carrie
Spence Sr Avatar
September 9, 2008 at 1:50 PM
This is wonderful. It has the making of a senryu since it's almost 17 syllables. If you make it three lines this it becomes a senryu (Japanese poetic form). Great job! ~Joseph
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