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Shopping Malls

Shopping malls, where people gather, shop, then go crazy. wrote 9-9-08

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George Williams

Date: 9/10/2008 8:27:00 PM

oh yes I hate shopping malls, a very good poem.

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/9/2008 4:40:00 PM

I must say I have gotten over shopping malls. Not shopping, just the big malls where it is easy to go crazy! Love, Shar

Deneen White

Date: 9/9/2008 4:25:00 PM

never a truer statement, this write made me smile, James read my write entitled the men of poetry soup, take care D-ncye

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/9/2008 4:01:00 PM

Malls....an American institution!! :)....Carrie

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/9/2008 1:50:00 PM

This is wonderful. It has the making of a senryu since it's almost 17 syllables. If you make it three lines this it becomes a senryu (Japanese poetic form). Great job! ~Joseph