Sidney Hall Mad Poet Poet Rhyme

Shopping Is a Riot

Broke the door
Gotta Iphone4
A TV
Dvd
Laptop 
I can't stop
Popped back in the shop
Ooh! ooh! another Iphone
Gotta go home 
Cant carry any more
Me arms are gettin’ sore
But I think I can manage two more
So back into the store
For me 8month olds son a fluffy toy
And me 8year old a game boy
I think I will call it a day 
Gotta home quick a and sell them on ebay.

*Bloody riots in London. When all the smoke settles who pays for it we do, the tax payer Bollocks.

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Doris Culverhouse September 15, 2011 at 4:53 PM Need a new poem my friend!!

Doris Culverhouse August 31, 2011 at 7:29 AM yep stinks!! Are things better now??

Wilma Neels August 16, 2011 at 7:59 AM Hey there Sidney did you get anything sold on ebay?? just kidding.. Quite a fitting piece for the turmoil in London last week.. Hope you are doing okay.. love W

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2011 at 2:29 AM so agreed,..p.d.

Joanna Davis August 12, 2011 at 5:52 PM Hi Sid, a timely poem on a very emotive subject…well written Jo Davis

Elizabeth Wesley August 11, 2011 at 11:48 AM Hi Sid, a great verse on the gotta have syndrome. P.S Why don't the shoot the rioters? Some lessons need to be taught the hard way.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 9, 2011 at 10:54 PM Clever write Sidney.... great subject matter as well..... nicely penned!!!!!!!