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Shopping Center Sailors

A leisurely coffee, conversation that barely makes it across the table before slipping back into silence, shapes passing by shadowed in the blurr of their growing distance. They gather at ten, old men, landlocked yet in their mind’s aegean, letting out their long nets beneath a vast shopping center ceiling arching over them like an endless sky, horizons drawing them further out to where, one day, they won’t return.

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Date: 4/5/2023 7:30:00 PM
Hi Paul….so perfectly said! I often see the old men gatherings at the shopping centres and have wondered what their lives were like before getting old. Your title is what drew me in just love it as l do this poem. Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/5/2023 9:17:00 PM
Thanks Deb for reading and leaving your comments. I was bold enough one time to strike up a conversation with such a group, prompted by the same question you posed. Most were retired fishermen, hence tte direction the poem took.
Date: 4/5/2023 4:44:00 PM
Hello, Paul. I saw your comment on Daniel's poem, so I wanted to read something by you. This is well written, and I love your line, "landlocked yet in their mind’s aegean,"
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/5/2023 6:33:00 PM
Thankyou Jenna for visiting and leaving such a kind note. Appreciated, Paul

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