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Shoots a Laser Gun

shoots a laser gun
at rows of quick aliens - -
they invade with ease

for Gwendolen’s Video Game Extravaganza contest

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Apoorva Patrikar

September 29, 2012 at 1:28 AM

few lines, but great stuff within! good luck

Wilma Neels

August 12, 2012 at 9:40 AM

You brought back memories with this one Jack, can't remember when last I played a video game.. hope your weekend is a brilliant one my friend :) lfde Wilma

David Williams

August 12, 2012 at 6:06 AM

Jack, I like it, good luck, hope you enter my latest one...David

Andrea Dietrich

August 12, 2012 at 12:02 AM

You did it again, making a shortie poem that really works for this contest!

Russell Sivey

August 11, 2012 at 9:25 PM

What a fabulously incredible write my friend! I simple love these shorter writes and this once didn't disappoint me! Watch out for those dang aliens, they invade quickly and are fierce when they do arrive! Wonderful poem Jack! Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

August 11, 2012 at 7:04 PM

Hi, Jack... ha..i'm a video game lover... I love gaming on fighting... I' don't do shooting games.. and i will never grow up..lol..good luck in Rix..contest.....xox~pd