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Shoots a Laser Gun

shoots a laser gun at rows of quick aliens - - they invade with ease for Gwendolen’s Video Game Extravaganza contest

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Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/29/2012 1:28:00 AM

few lines, but great stuff within! good luck

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/12/2012 9:40:00 AM

You brought back memories with this one Jack, can't remember when last I played a video game.. hope your weekend is a brilliant one my friend :) lfde Wilma

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 6:06:00 AM

Jack, I like it, good luck, hope you enter my latest one...David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2012 12:02:00 AM

You did it again, making a shortie poem that really works for this contest!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/11/2012 9:25:00 PM

What a fabulously incredible write my friend! I simple love these shorter writes and this once didn't disappoint me! Watch out for those dang aliens, they invade quickly and are fierce when they do arrive! Wonderful poem Jack! Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2012 7:04:00 PM

Hi, Jack... ha..i'm a video game lover... I love gaming on fighting... I' don't do shooting games.. and i will never grow up..lol..good luck in Rix..contest.....xox~pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2012 1:45:00 PM

Good one...Winner of the game and contest..Enjoyed your humorous work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/11/2012 1:27:00 PM

Groooovy! Fast action in a fast action Haiku!! Good luck in the contest... Terry