Shooting Stars All

Shooting stars all
Ashen faced; us, the dust floating aimlessly 
feeling unimportant and dull.
We aim for something so much bigger.
We collide and burn in fiery flash.
The other motes, watch and applaud.
We the shooting star; fleeting, bow out,
and encourage the others.
Like petals falling from the flower of hope

Trekking and heaping the sand
we walk on this pebble, circling a stark plug 
and build our little kingdoms.
At night we look up and see 
the shooting stars and contemplate our mortality.
Knowing we are drawn to something so much bigger,
and we burn on entry to our heaven.
A fiery death, that cleanses and embraces our humanity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 19, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Ross. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 PM
Thank you Carol. I'll have to look into the premium membership migjig :)
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