Shooting Stars

Tattoed spirits         Riding the waves          Prehistoric man        Out from the 
caves       Curdling war cries       From ghostly braves      Cries of freedom       
Echoed by slaves        Ghostly figures        Voices from the graves       These 
shooting stars      The Gods timely saves                     Richard  Ferry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 9, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Hi Richard, , Thank you so much, for the support.... A forever poetry soup joy, when congratulating all contest winners.... Enjoy your day... Forever ~LINDA
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April 9, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Muchas Gracias senora....Rick
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December 1, 2013 at 12:13 PM
deep and powerful poem great flow
Ferry Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 12:29 PM
Thanks
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November 30, 2013 at 2:57 AM
Whoa! Beautiful write Richard! I love the construction and the way the words flow smoothly. Very well written!
Ferry Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Vicky
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November 30, 2013 at 1:48 AM
I agree with Barbara here, this is a very creative poem, my friend. I'm back from my quick Thanksgiving trip and enjoying poetry at Soup again. Hope you had a great thanksgiving day.
Ferry Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Glad you are back
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November 27, 2013 at 2:50 AM
This is quite creative. I like the layout.. Serves the content well. BG
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November 29, 2013 at 1:23 AM
Thanks
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