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Shooting Stars

In the nighttime sky Fiery stars bleed Casting aside what binds them Freeing themselves From distant prisons Never to come back Jumping from invisible woes Platforms deteriorate Free-falling forever Into outcast oblivion Taking in the atmosphere To burn out And disappear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/21/2010 11:30:00 AM
There emits a sense of soaring beauty and thorough insight. I wonder if "Shooting Stars has connection in myriad ways. Always a greater vision to capture in constellations. Thanks. Jan
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