Shooting Stars

Muzzle flashes
the stars shoot straight,
no curve balls, they light you up,
you feel the silver bullets
ricocheting inside the elastic walls
of your cringing red dot of a heart.
Low caliber
but they linger,
bounce around just long enough
for you to know 
that according to the long arm 
of the Universe
you hardly exist at all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Hello Eric Asford, I have never seen a shooting star. you were lucky to see one. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Hello Eric, yes we have to watch out for the bullets. I agree. enjoy your day my friend.
Ashford Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Hi Darlene, thanks for the comment. It's the bullets that you have to watch out for :-) e
Woodrow Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 10:20 AM
lovely said! yes, it's always a thrill to see a shooting star :)
Ashford Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Thank you Susan, yes but you never know who's the target! e
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