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Shooting Stars

How bright they are, those shooting stars
that dart across the evening sky!
We gaze at them with wonderment,
aware their light will quickly die.

We grownups know the truth about
these beauties. They’re not stars at all,
but dust and bits of rock that shine,
then burn up as they quickly fall.

When kids say, “Look—a shooting star,”
let’s not be killjoys who declare     
the scientific facts about
what’s zooming through the nighttime air!


Date Posted: August 13, 2019

Contest Title: Shooting Stars    Received an NA

Date: September 25, 2019
Contest Title: N-A Rerun 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
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Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 1:23 PM
Congrats on your win. ;0)
Canerdy Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Thank you, Richard. Janice
Godwin Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 4:46 PM
A beautiful poem that grew more poetry joy in me with each line! Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Thanks so much, CayCay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 7:35 AM
So much joy up above in the sky..you captured the essence in your lovely quatrain, Janice..I enjoyed the read..all the best for the contest.
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