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How bright they are, those shooting stars that dart across the evening sky! We gaze at them with wonderment, aware their light will quickly die. We grownups know the truth about these beauties. They’re not stars at all, but dust and bits of rock that shine, then burn up as they quickly fall. When kids say, “Look—a shooting star,” let’s not be killjoys who declare the scientific facts about what’s zooming through the nighttime air! Date Posted: August 13, 2019 Contest Title: Shooting Stars Received an NA Date: September 25, 2019 Contest Title: N-A Rerun 3 Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 9/28/2019 1:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win. ;0)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/28/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. Janice
Date: 8/15/2019 4:46:00 PM
A beautiful poem that grew more poetry joy in me with each line! Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/15/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, CayCay! Janice
Date: 8/14/2019 7:35:00 AM
So much joy up above in the sky..you captured the essence in your lovely quatrain, Janice..I enjoyed the read..all the best for the contest.
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