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Shooting Star

Should I reach for the sky and catch this shooting star, As she charily sheds her dainty white light? Should I sail the seas without her treasure map, And infinitely lose myself in her brown eyes? Should I grapple her love, reach for the heart in sight, And touch the beautiful flame of her candlelight? Should I reach for the sky and catch this special star, Even though all she might do is burn my fragile heart? - written on August 6th, 2016

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Date: 11/7/2016 2:16:00 PM
Very well done. Questions so many face when unsure of the feelings they start to feel for another!
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Kasonde Besa
Date: 11/7/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thanks. Yes indeed!

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