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a shooting star streaks across the sky-- I wish for peace 3/21/14 Entered in Andrea's Itty Bitty contest

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Date: 4/9/2014 2:28:00 PM
Peace is a wonderful thing to wish for. I hope that your wish comes true! A very nice haiku, Kim. Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Date: 4/6/2014 8:12:00 AM
A lovely thing to wish for on your falling star....congratulations on your win...
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Date: 4/6/2014 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, kim
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Date: 4/4/2014 9:22:00 PM
lovely win Kim...SKAT
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Date: 4/4/2014 5:44:00 PM
KIM, Congratulations, awesome VERSE! xox ~LINDA
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Date: 4/4/2014 12:34:00 PM
simple but ...it ROCKS!!!! ..Congratulations on your big win in Andie's contest!!! ..:O0)
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Date: 4/4/2014 12:45:00 AM
a simple , yet very wonderful message for peace! Congratulations in my contest.
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Date: 3/22/2014 4:22:00 PM
wonderful, lady!
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Date: 3/22/2014 1:49:00 PM
real one..i love it
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Date: 3/22/2014 3:28:00 AM
It's a real haiku. Bravo!
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Date: 3/21/2014 5:27:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku Kim. Jan xxx
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Date: 3/21/2014 3:25:00 PM
nice one, kim! don't we all...
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Date: 3/21/2014 2:08:00 PM
Nice imagery Kim! ' I wish for peace...' Me too!
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