Kim Merryman Poet Haiku

Shooting Star

a shooting star
                                                   streaks across the sky--
                                                        I wish for peace

3/21/14
Entered in Andrea's
Itty Bitty contest

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Kelly Deschler April 9, 2014 at 2:28 PM Peace is a wonderful thing to wish for. I hope that your wish comes true! A very nice haiku, Kim. Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)

Donna Jones April 6, 2014 at 8:12 AM A lovely thing to wish for on your falling star....congratulations on your win...

Dr.Ram Mehta April 6, 2014 at 6:21 AM Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, kim

Skat A April 4, 2014 at 9:22 PM lovely win Kim...SKAT

Poet Destroyer A April 4, 2014 at 5:44 PM KIM, Congratulations, awesome VERSE! xox ~LINDA

Aiyah Torres April 4, 2014 at 12:34 PM simple but ...it ROCKS!!!! ..Congratulations on your big win in Andie's contest!!! ..:O0)

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2014 at 12:45 AM a simple , yet very wonderful message for peace! Congratulations in my contest.

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2014 at 4:22 PM wonderful, lady!

Muhereza Rodgers Roger March 22, 2014 at 1:49 PM real one..i love it

Vassilis Comporozos March 22, 2014 at 3:28 AM It's a real haiku. Bravo!

Jan Allison March 21, 2014 at 5:27 PM Beautiful Haiku Kim. Jan xxx

Ilene Bauer March 21, 2014 at 3:25 PM nice one, kim! don't we all...

Keith O.J. Hunt March 21, 2014 at 2:08 PM Nice imagery Kim! ' I wish for peace...' Me too!