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Shooting Star

On a moon-lit night, a sky lit up, so clear and bright. I lay in the woods, so calm at rest. The moon has peaked, its yellow crest. A cricket sings, its chirping tune, to the cool, soft breeze. The leaves flutter ever so gently, swaying in the shadowed trees. A deer runs and bounds, so quick and free. A snail edges by, ever so silently. The water from the brook quietly flows. The heavens are so clear, the universe, gallently glows. A streak glides across the sky, a star is falling as I watch it die. Another star will give its birth, and again another light, will shadow Gods earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/28/2011 3:40:00 PM
Love the picture you've created with this piece. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:39:00 AM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing James. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
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