Shooting Star

Light up my world
Take away the darkness
Show me to have some faith

Touch me softly
Hold me close
Kiss my lips with care
For when you do all of these things
We'll be the perfect pair

You came unseen into my life
I made a wish on you
And like a shooting star
You are coming true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 2:14 PM
A nice poem to read. Well done.
Guzzi Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 5:12 PM
Very nice rhyming verse...you have what's called slip rhyme or half rhyme...care/pair..you/true...Light & Love
Loving Iii Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 5:27 PM
somebody found happiness. john
Alldredge Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 6:43 PM
WOW! Sounds as if someone swept you off your feet. I felt your passion in your words. Great
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