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L Milton Hankins

Shooting Star

shooting star leaves light    
     kiss on distant treetop while 
          skipping out of sight


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July 31, 2021

Copyright © L Milton Hankins | Year Posted 2021

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Richard Lamoureux

January 30, 2021 at 3:33 PM

Well expressed.

L Milton Hankins

February 5, 2021 at 8:12 PM

Richard, I appreciate your visit very much.

Linda Alice Fowler

January 27, 2021 at 3:20 PM

Nice one LM. :) Love the "skipping out of sight" line! Linda

L Milton Hankins

January 27, 2021 at 3:34 PM

Thanks for reading some of my work, Linda. I appreciate you and your comments.

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