Line Gauthier Poet Concrete

Shooting Star

                                                                                           i 
                                                                                         love
                                                                               how up in the sky
                                                                                   late at night
                                                                                 we            can

                                                                            see
                                                                       how
                                                                   the
                                                       wonders
                                         divine put on
                       a show that’s simply
spectacular for you and me



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

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Jeanne Mcgee August 12, 2019 at 2:41 PM this love your creativity with this poem. A sure winner. Nice write. Line Gauthier August 12, 2019 at 6:58 PM Thank you very much, Jeanne. Most appreciated.

Ann Gilmour August 12, 2019 at 11:43 AM Oh wow Line, that is simply stunning and your magical words bring the sky to life. I live in a penthouse apartment and feel so much closer to the sky and moon - don't think I could ever live on the ground again, haha... sending love and kindest thoughts Ann xx PS good luck with the contest Line Gauthier August 12, 2019 at 12:03 PM Thank you so much, Ann. It certainly is lovely to live up in the sky.

Lonna Blodgett August 12, 2019 at 11:39 AM Line I love this! Its like riding on the stars! Lonna Line Gauthier August 12, 2019 at 12:02 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Lonna.

Sandra Adams August 12, 2019 at 10:17 AM very creative piece Line, i love it, shooting stars are always awesome to see :) hugs Line Gauthier August 12, 2019 at 12:02 PM Thank you, Sandra, for your most appreciated visit and comment.