Shoeless Summer

Tiptoeing across the dewy grass
 in the fresh and early morn
Cool and wet is the feeling I get
 no shoes have I worn

Trudging through scorching sand
 to find a place to sit
As I perspire my feet are on fire
 my flip flops I did omit

Late evenings on the porch swing
 cooler air watching the sun set
Breezes tickle my toes then rise to my nose
 A pair of slippers I seemed to forget

Summer is in the air everywhere
From my bare feet and flowers so sweet
Through your toes and your nose
May you truly hail all this season unveils

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/19/2011 9:32:00 AM
A great rhyme with memories of my own bare feet. Thank you for the visit and hope today is better than yesterdayfor you. Love.......Elizabeth
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:58:00 AM
a winner for me, shani... what a tapestry of painted words... :) huggs,nette
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Date: 6/12/2011 5:50:00 AM
A wonderful "barefoot" poem, Shani, I wish you applauding success with this beauty and welcome to Premium Membership, it will be an awesome experience, you will find there are many wonderful helpful and amazing poets on this site...your first blog was delightful, it seems to me you live a sublime life and about your age... with your love of life.. you are ageless in my eyes~~
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:41:00 PM
yes nothing nicer than free feet! Light & Love
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:15:00 PM
Shani, Another top for a contest. and yes i know how topronounce your name..lol. it was looking for it.. that took me a while... good luck and you take care now..p.d.
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