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Shoe Persona

Was once a display
The sudden eye ambition 
Trusty appendage 

The hind to the heel 
Broken in to much appeal 
A preferable feel 


Inspired by Raul Moreno’s “still life” contest!

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 20, 2010 at 12:46 PM

Hi Laura... can u please check your contest entries to see if they are intact as all of mine have disappeared from my current contest... please let me know.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

April 18, 2010 at 5:16 AM

Great write...Much thought has gone into this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping and commenting on my work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 17, 2010 at 8:13 PM

Good luck in the contest. What a nice explicit images!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 17, 2010 at 7:15 PM

Wonderful words Laura and good luck in Raul's new contest.. luv his photos and this one is a bit different than the scenic ones... thankxxx for your comments on my Opulent Orchid .. but .. its not an entry.. I am sponsoring this new contest and always like to write my own poem about the contest just for poets to view what I am looking for ... as an entry... luv.. and happy Sunday... Linda-Marie..