Shoe

Black ship, kick the door!
Your language is dust
Cornered, sacred words
A forgotten sheep
Demanding a shift
Thunderstorm clouds attend
No one will notice, in the end

Incomplete carcasses
Diamond worm domain
In your prism-like universe
Fed on geometric shapes
Rhyme that door!
Run away!

Black ship, sail!
Smashing broccoli heads
Reach the portal in the rain
Floating bowl on cosmic haystacks
Look it up with my velvet spoon
Then join the silk, sonic blast
On the roof

Oh, but your hands are tied!
Symbiosis shall come in hand
Blow my steps way up high
(Balloons and thread look alike
When papered by fish in flight)
Spider my past into the air
And I shall take you there
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 10:46 AM
Love your style =) your words are ecentric, shattering the known worlds visions. xoxo Raiin
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 12:28 PM
Cesar, this is really wonderful poem i came across as Gary said" beauitful words flowing vividly' truely you have put life into the words. thanks and many thanks for your comments. cheers
Shango Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 7:37 AM
The metaphor maker: spider my past in air ... love it. Wonderful write.
Poe Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 6:27 PM
I like your style soul shaking -Alley
Orozco Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Great write! This is really good! - jeremiah
Attal Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 1:35 AM
Wow! This is a SPECTACULAR poem. I absolutely love your delicious taste in words, and the way the poem flows. Amazing!! Thanks for sharing!! =D
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